For all teenagers.Are these magical powers attractive enough?

Here are the magical powers that i made for my characters.





Most of the characters are able to posses an object that has been magically redefined.





For eg:A pencil that can conjure up a fire spell.


A ring that can summon demons from the air


A hammer that can destroy huge creatures and walls......etc.





is this magical system good enough?For all teenagers.Are these magical powers attractive enough?
Hi, if you were to use this concept for a teen novel you may need to consider actually giving them powers. The whole magical object topic has been used a considerable amount. But if these objects had some other significance than your idea could definitely work. Perhaps if they were discovered and ';lost'; many thousands of years prior to their ';rediscovery'; by your characters. That could work. But maybe them just owning the objects is really not enough. It needs something more.





I hope this helps. Good luck!For all teenagers.Are these magical powers attractive enough?
for a children's book, definitely not a teen novel.
nothing special





its been overdone sry
Not really.. I mean its been overdone...
no...not really not for teenagers but for the age group 8 to 10 it would be ok....
I agree, it's been done.